Parents should be held legally responsible for their children’s acts. What is your opinion? Support it with personal examples.
<div style="color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: small; white-space: normal;">One of the conspicuous trends in today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that parents are responsible for their children's performance. There are widespread reasons that can make this statement true. In my opinion, parents are responsible for children's acts. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view with relevant examples.</div><div style="color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: small; white-space: normal;"><br></div><div style="color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: small; white-space: normal;">To commence with, there are myriad of reasons why I am in favour of the aforementioned statement. Foremost among these, I accord that parents are responsible for children’s upbringing. Children learns from his family during his growing age so, if parents failed to teach them good manner then they should be legally responsible for this. For instance, in America legal system, parents punished for their children’s acts. Hence, parents are legally responsible for their children development.</div><div style="color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: small; white-space: normal;"><br></div><div style="color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: small; white-space: normal;">On the other hand, some people believe that society is more responsible for children action instead of their parents. From a personal perspective, children are very close to their parents or they spend most of the time with their family. So parents are easily aware of their children's good or bad habits, but nevertheless, if they avoid these things then undoubtedly they would be responsible for their actions. For example, many terrorists belong with that family where parents avoid their mistakes. Therefore, parent’s ignorance is responsible for their crime that they perform at a young age.</div><div style="color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: small; white-space: normal;"><br></div><div style="color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: small; white-space: normal;">In the views of the argument outlined above, one can conclude that children learns things under parents surveillance so they should be held legally responsible for their children's negative or positive acts. </div>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1832, Rule ID: BUT_NEVERTHELESS[1]
Message: Use simply 'but'.
Suggestion: but
... of their childrens good or bad habits, but nevertheless, if they avoid these things then undoub...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 20.9802955665 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2272.0 1207.87684729 188% => OK
No of words: 343.0 242.827586207 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.62390670554 5.00649968141 132% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 3.92707691288 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.3780808278 2.71678728327 161% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463556851312 0.580463131201 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 630.0 379.143842365 166% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 173.889073039 50.4703680194 345% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 189.333333333 104.977214359 180% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5833333333 20.9669160288 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.25397266985 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.12807881773 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322236014914 0.242375264174 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.195991344443 0.0925447433944 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100781278269 0.071462118173 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.322236014914 0.151781067708 212% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.0 12.6369458128 190% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 53.1260098522 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.9458128079 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 21.71 11.5310837438 188% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.94827586207 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.5123152709 162% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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