Cement Making and Concrete Production
The diagram illustrates the stages and tools required to produce cement and concrete. It is clear that the manufacturing of cement is a linear process with a special equipment and then is used to get concrete for building.
To begin with, limestone and clay are the raw materials which are crushed into powder at first stage. After that, the ingredients, having been mixed by a special tool, then are transported into the rotating mechanism where the powder are heated. Subsequently the composition is ground into particles which called cement. At the last stage cement is packaged in the bags.
Regarding of concrete production, this is one-step process. The received cement is mixed by tool clockwise with gravel, water and sand in different proportions. Gravel makes up a half in the total amount. Moreover, sand represents one-quarter, while cement and water account the least proportion at 15% and 10% respectively. The result of this process is concrete which is ready for use in building.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 247, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Subsequently,
... mechanism where the powder are heated. Subsequently the composition is ground into particle...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, regarding, then, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15950920245 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82020476115 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60736196319 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.150986772 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.4545454545 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8181818182 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230034872125 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856897891093 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459534288301 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155615959388 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598630503052 0.0819641961636 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.