There are many different types of music in the world today. Why we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
In the present scenario, people listen to music according to their choices and tastes. There are various kinds of music nowadays such as pop music, classical, traditional, western, folk music, and many more. Music has now become one of the major hobbies for the denizens to overcome the stress. In my opinion, traditional music plays a vital role to retain the value of history and culture of a county for the upcoming generations.
To begin with, in today’s busy life, music is necessary for people to get relief from their problems and tension or burden. Music can break the monotony of life and able to full life with enjoyment. Without music, there is no taste of life. Moreover, with music people are able to express their views, emotions, and thoughts. In many vacations like marriage, festivals, and cultural programs music is like cheery on a cake. It enhances the charm of those programs and helps to make unforgettable memories for the people. Rich lyrics can improve the intellectual level and it is often said that a person could be judged by the types of music he listens to.
Furthermore, traditional music is an integral part of the human expression that is unable to separate from peoples’ lives even if there is the various evolution of music. Traditional music is the root of the country’s history, culture, customs, and heritage things. However, it is true that international music helps to bind people globally. People learn the history and culture of other nations too but it should not be overlap. In India, some festivals like Dewali, Onam, and Holi have their own songs and in some regions, there are songs for funeral also. Therefore, for the children, these songs help a lot to know about history and culture,
In conclusion, people put more attention and show a high level of interest when something which is directly related to their tradition and culture and the same goes for music. Traditional music makes people proud of their rich culture and helps to make a unique identity in the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95362318841 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62222578222 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55652173913 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3136696245 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9444444444 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389575415155 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142561878854 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0927007435911 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258961167456 0.151304729494 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731127200562 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.