Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people think that the more development of society is, the more options customers have. From my perspective, I totally agree with this pointview for two following reasons.
Apparently, the advancement of technology plays an important role in our modern life that helps us to easily access to cutting-edge information. If it had not been the internet, we could have never extended our range to have a broad view of market and know what suppliers and manufacturers for products we tend to buy. Customers become more sensitive about latest shopping tendency, regularly surfing the internet for searching price and quality of products before making any purchase decision. In addition to this, internet marketing and public advertisement such as standees or billboards on streets have been very ubiquitous for potential customers. It is not only trigger shopping but also assist end users to choose better products and services, getting smarter buyers than ever.
On the other hand, it is needless to say that we have been experiencing the toughest business competition period with a significantly increasing number of private enterprises in various industries. As an announced statistic in 2018, there was a higher percentage of small to average scale companies than before. People can conveniently buy things what we want in their neighborhood, which is synonymous with more promotion campaigns to defeat rivals. In trading battles, customers usually take the best advantages; therefore, they have the numberless choices to get the greatest deal at the most reasonable price.
In conclusion, although we are facing the intense competition stage, I must admit that it also provides customers more options in many fields.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 352, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'about the latest'.
Suggestion: about the latest
...to buy. Customers become more sensitive about latest shopping tendency, regularly surfing th...
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Line 3, column 722, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
...ing but also assist end users to choose better products and services, getting smarter ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, if, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42222222222 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95799583654 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685185185185 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6134771052 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148108760617 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502439636885 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484257491386 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0904134842537 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0190520290908 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.