Medical technology can increase life expectancy. Is it a blessing or a curse?
One of the most conspicuous trends in today world is a colossal upsurge in medical technology that engineers are helping to develop medical treatment machines and with these machines, doctors can easily diagnosis their patient's problem, where some people think these innovations are not a blessing and these are the main curse. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in one’s life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
There are a number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that these medical inventions are playing crucial role in hospitals and machines like MRI, X-RAY and CT-SCAN are helping in masses and doctors life and these cannot only contribute to public but also lead to numerous other benefits in various fields, Thanks to a wide range of advantages it offers, not only can one benefit more when it comes to being effective, but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand one in good stead, as far as augmenting their chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned proposition is that it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Besides, only one when follows such a system, can they broaden their horizons, thus learning such essential attributes as responsibility, dedication and perseverance. Hence, it is apparent that medical technology is a blessing.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of medical machines and technology are too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 282.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05319148936 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77590727223 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560283687943 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 134.154425943 50.4703680194 266% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 142.5 104.977214359 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2 20.9669160288 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.25397266985 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178709920456 0.242375264174 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071395178808 0.0925447433944 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735093576994 0.071462118173 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123065399778 0.151781067708 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038190414279 0.0609392437508 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 53.1260098522 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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