Many parents encourage young people to leave home when they become older,
while others think they should stay at home with the family.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
All children around the world will become youngsters then mature adults one day, as this is the holistic development of life.
On one hand, some parents believe that when their young finish high school, they should move out to depend on themselves to impetus
responsibility in them. On the other hand,others thought that they still need their family support to guide them nevertheless engross them with their experiences.
I vividly support the latter idea, as life is an enduring journey that require family support, undoubtedly they will never be unreliable.
As some hold the opinion of leaving their adolescents to depend on themselves and start to
build their own lives to be a responsible mature by igniting them to live in another place.
Moreover to be a grownup and start to earn their own money nevertheless face the burden
of life and bear its brunt. With this dependent attitude, they will be strong-willed and tough enough to face any problems.
Parents that have raised their children and inculcate the sense of responsibility in them engrossed with the idea to have their teenagers with them as long as possible.
They know that it is a cruel place outside and their youth are still in need of their support and protection thus they are still unexperienced and unable to make faire judgements , especially after the social media that invaded our lives.
In conclusion, Parents idolize their kids and the family support is peerless , even if they are not staying with them. Nowadays are full of absurd people , communities and ideas that really a person is in need of a mature and trusted heart to lead him through the right way. I rectify that the love and sticking together of a family is worthless cause of the endless affection and support that you will always get unconditionally.
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...gross them with their experiences. I vividly support the latter idea, as li...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, nevertheless, really, so, still, then, thus, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.125 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70189892995 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552631578947 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.0242009704 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.833333333 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.38176352705 251% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148014004857 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603819911921 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423528603959 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0609575145696 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331817248196 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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