Parents today are more involved in their children's education than parents were in the past.
Are there any parents that do not care about their children's training? As far as I consider, Parents always do their best for their kids; and it is not related to a special time. some people say that today parents have much more attention to their younger's education that past; But I do not think so. Personally, I believe that parents often have been the best support for their children. I feel this way for 3 main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
Firstly, being educated is common today, and many parents have high level of education their selves. As a result, it is clearly that they can support their juvenile in this field. But this can not result to the point that they were less involved in their kid's education in the past. For example, not only did my grand father always encourage my father to develop his knowledge, but also he organized some gifts for raising his desire.
The second reason that some people may think parents have more attention to education now is our professional jobs. In the past, many jobs were available which did not need to specific information. Then persons could take them with little effort. However, now it is impossible to gain a job only in one field, and without having enough information about computer, sociology, etc. So, it is clear that parents be more concern about their career's place.
Last but not least, having more children was a strong point in the past. In contrary, today's life style do not allow to parents have more than 1 or 2 childs. As a result, it is natural that previous parents had little time and money for providing better educational conditions. Again, it is not correct conclusion that they have little role in their kid's training.
In all, what drives some parents to have less support in their younger's education in the past may fall into 3 basic categories such as having low level of information, no need for special skills to have a job, and having little amount of time or money. In other word, it can be deduced that parents are more involved in their children's training only because of new lifestyle and not because of their preferences!
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e and not because of their preferences!
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, so, then, for example, i feel, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1775.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69576719577 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.397200585 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510582010582 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.430260188 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.75 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.433591907577 0.236089414692 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146233116287 0.076458572812 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101780792362 0.0737576698707 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266895338932 0.150856017488 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506564876102 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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