Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.
In what ways has technology affected the types of relationship people make?
has this become a positive or negative development?
Along with the advancement of technology, the pattern of communication among the folks have been altered since the last few decades. With the progression in technology although, it has made the lives of an individual easier and time managing, in my opinion, this is a negative development because it can lead to isolation, potentially harm situations and also problems later on in life.
To begin with, the most obvious problem that can arise from peoole socializing online is that it can lead to isolation.Before the internet, people would frequently go out to meet friends.for example:in cafes, bars or restaurants, whereas now people prefer to stay at home alone, chatting online. As a result, people are starting to spend the majority of their time alone at home in their room without meeting others. isolation of this kind is not healthy and can sometimes lead to depressiin and other issues.
Another issue is that meeting people online can be risky. people may assume fake identities online as well as hide their true characters. this is particularly concerning for teenagers who are impressionable and can be led easily into dangerous situations. Furthermore, as this interaction is online, parents are unknown and have no way of monitoring it and protecting their children.
Finally, socializing online can end in difficulties years later as conversations and shared photos that had been forgotten reappear. this situation is currently critical for many people, again especially for teenagers who don't think carefully before posting online. The information which is put online can remain there forever and while people share intimate conversations with close friends, these words can then resurface later on leading to much embarassment.
In conclusion, although it has beacome more popular for people to socalize through the internet, it has brought to many problems for this to be considered as a positive trend.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99506193618 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.0882877874 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.538461538 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5384615385 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198579289923 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669083234949 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350284189395 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108670631911 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253839863177 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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