All parents should be required to volunteer their time to their children's schools.
Children’s school good performance mostly requires attention from their parents, but it doesn't mean that all parents need to volunteer their time to schools, sacrificing their time spent on the work. From my perspective, requiring all parents to volunteer time to their children’s schools is not necessary and it is even useless sometimes.
I have to admit that when parents stay in the classroom, accompanying their children during the class, their children will focus on the class other than sleep or talk with their partners. For fear of being criticized by their parents, children usually concentrate on learning new knowledge. However, does this an effective and efficient measure for schools and parents to foster a good habit of their children? In my opinion, the answer is not. Under supervision, although students can behave well in class, it is hasty to claim that without those supervision, they will keep paying much attention to the class and homework instead of talking with classmates in class. It is possible that those naughty children can change their way temporarily when their parents are in school, but they will still talk loudly in class when their parents are not in school. Then it is a waste of time and not a successful way for children to foster the good habit.
Besides, considering the busy work and much pressure from the company and the increasingly fierce market, most parents cannot leave their work behind in order to visit their children’s schools. As we know, when children are in school, their parents are also in the company, working hard to earn money to support the family. If all parents are required to volunteer their precious time to their children’s school, then I believe there will inevitably emerge complaints among those parents who think this requirement incredibly unnecessary. Also, for those parents who care little about their children, when they follow the requirement, it is likely that they will continue their work utilizing their mobile phones, paying little attention to their children. If so, this measure cannot be as effective a way as imagined.
Moreover, for most schools, it is hard to accept so many parents, given the limited teachers and leaders in school. What’s more, as far as safety is concerned, too many parents contribute to the uncertainty among children, the difficulty to control all parents, and even the danger of the students. For example, all parents are required to arrive at school after five o’ clock in the afternoon. During the last class before five, all teachers have to prepare well for welcoming those parents and the safe guards need to be highly alert in distinguishing those parents for fear of enabling strangers to enter the school. For schools, this measure requires so much energy and people, which may result in little satisfaction from all the stuff in school.
In a nutshell, although parents, when in school, can allow their children to behave well, this requirement cannot be a good way given positive impacts and the cost of schools. Accordingly, it is unwise to require all parents to volunteer their time to their children’s schools.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 94, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...es attention from their parents, but it doesnt mean that all parents need to volunteer...
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Line 3, column 543, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this supervision' or 'those supervisions'?
Suggestion: this supervision; those supervisions
...lass, it is hasty to claim that without those supervision, they will keep paying much attention t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, then, well, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 33.0505617978 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2672.0 2235.4752809 120% => OK
No of words: 519.0 442.535393258 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14836223507 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7730044521 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76932442076 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.447013487476 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 777.6 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.10617977528 290% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6587431731 60.3974514979 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.238095238 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7142857143 23.4991977007 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2380952381 5.21951772744 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.526225953999 0.243740707755 216% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.205428371759 0.0831039109588 247% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.163177487631 0.0758088955206 215% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.397174356686 0.150359130593 264% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139435099171 0.0667264976115 209% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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