Successful sport professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Professional athletes are capable of earning an enormous income rather than other absolutely pivotal occupations. In accordance with this statement, several individuals reckon that they deserved to obtain it, nevertheless, others think that it is unfair. Regarding this argument, this essay will explain both points of view and also put forward my perspective in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, numerous people believe that all professional athletes are supposed to be well-paid as they have to do various efforts to make the country which they represented proud. They tend to consider that it is caused by various reasons. all those athletes, first and foremost, have to train hard in order to bestow their best performance on the competition. Second but not less crucial, it is apparent the impact which they are going to produce will benefit the nation which they represented. For instance, if these athletes are able to win from the competition, it will confer a positive impact to the image of the state which they represented. Therefore, I tend to support this assumption due to the fact that the impacts which they are going to produce is fruitful for the nation.
Nevertheless, other persons assume that it is unfair since other vocations also render a positive influence to all aspects of the county. Moreover, they reckon that the scheme of rendering an immense income to the athlete is supposed to be deleted in order to create a fair intake for all individuals.
By way of conclusion, it seems to me that the enormous payment for athlete is necessary to be done in order to appreciate their endeavour. Thus, I tend to think that other people who opposed the payment for the athlete should accept the income of athletes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 245, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: All
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, second, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03793103448 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77861076162 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541379310345 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.9674366861 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 112.384615385 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141820310226 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551364787367 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586408961439 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1007776306 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661403069879 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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