Some people think that tgere are things individuals can do to help prevent global climate change. Others believe that action by individuals is useless and irrevelent and that us only governments and large business which can make a differencem
Climate change is a phenomenon affecting all people in all walks of life, from individual citizen to whole countries and huge multinational companies.so people can think about that what we can do to prevent global climate change and whether individual action is effective or not it is a hotly debate issue.
According to the first school of thoughts, many people say that majority of the damage is wrought by business. So government should make some prevention measure and take a harsh action against the factories which is spreading the waste rubbish in the area. If the authorities around the world should come up with the probable solution to prevent the massive disaster, so government should work on the global large-scale curb this massive climatic menace.
On the second school of thoughts, this is responsibility of the citizens because when everyone is concern about the disaster so they have to make a plausible solution. As in the world there are six billion people living so everyone should think about that how much water they used, where they dispose their rubbish, whether or not something needs to thrown away or if they can, in fact re-use the certain items then we would be giving the problem of climate change and its prevention massive boost.
Overall, it is true to say that the mutual efforts of people and government can prevent the issue of global climate change.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, then, in fact, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1163.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97008547009 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57988377211 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57264957265 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.157443357 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.142857143 106.682146367 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.4285714286 20.7667163134 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288381002626 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129487512782 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0951584048041 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190332289307 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805371733632 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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