It is not necessary to travel to other places to learn the culture of other people. We
can just learn much from books, films and the Internet. Do you agree or disagree?
Many people claim that instead of traveling to other countries to learn about new cultures, they can do it by reading books, watching films or surfing the Internet. While it is true that books, films, and the Internet provide a massive source of information, I believe we need to travel to other countries to learn more about their cultures.
To begin with, print, digital and Internet media help us to discover cultures all over the world.
Firstly, with high-quality media in this modern world, most cultures have been recorded and shared effectively. For example, Discovery Channel, which is a well-known TV program for the last twenty years, has been broadcasting more than 200 cultural episodes. Secondly, learning from those kinds of media could help us save money. If we spend money to travel to a foreign country, we might need to work hard for a long time for the preparation of the trip.
However, I would argue that we still need to go to new countries to have a better understanding of their cultures. First, there are knowledge and experiences which are gained by traveling only. For instance, most foreign students in the UK faced culture shocks even they had prepared well for studying abroad. Furthermore, interacting with local people is important to explore their culture. If we only learn about new countries via books, films, and information on the Internet, we would not have the chance to socialize with the local residents.
In conclusion, books, videos and other information sources from the Internet offer a great amount of useful information, I support the view that traveling to other places is a must to understand deeply new cultures.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 169, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (TV) must be used with a third-person verb: 'programs'.
Suggestion: programs
...overy Channel, which is a well-known TV program for the last twenty years, has been bro...
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Line 8, column 177, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...iew that traveling to other places is a must to understand deeply new cultures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02158273381 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70076580145 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58273381295 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0410387771 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.384615385 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6153846154 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242049116481 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840973877201 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868662853949 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144646528013 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0941244258056 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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