Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case, and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places?
It is true that local people in some countries do not visit museums and historical places which are usually favorite destinations of tourists. There are several causes of this phenomenon, and some effective solutions should be proposed to improve this situation.
To begin with, the low rate of local residents going to museums and historical places is caused by several factors. Firstly, since most people think that they know clearly about the history of their country, they are not interested in going to those places. This leads to the fact that most people prefer traveling abroad to visiting those spots. Secondly, citizens are not likely to pay an amount of money for entrance tickets of those places because the prices are usually high. For example, in Tokyo, people need to pay JPY 10000 for the entrance fee of an art museum, and this is not reasonable to most Japanese.
Several actions need to be taken to increase the number of local citizens visiting places of exhibitions and historical areas. The first solution would be to promote art and historical values. This can be done by launching a big advertising campaign on television or the Internet to raise public awareness of those values. Additionally, citizen discount tickets at those sites could help increase the number of local visitors. Finally, the authorities could offer free tours to local schools so they can go to those sites as extracurricular activities.
In conclusion, there are some reasons why local people are not interested in visiting museums and historical sites, and governments and individuals should come up early with solutions to this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14179104478 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69014065821 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541044776119 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3045683669 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340811849548 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122733625688 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735355591846 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221349030649 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392169873246 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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