Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
It is argued by many that setting up of more sport facilities can contribute to improvement in the health of public while others believe that additional measures are required for this and such facilities have very little effect on community. I do agree with the former statement because people will wisely use their leisure time if more facilities are available and this helps them stay healthy.
According to former group of people, introduction of health clubs help people spent their free time in a healthy way. This is because majority of population which includes retired persons and adults do activities like swimming, playing, gym etc and such activities burns extra calories and helps them maintain a healthy body mass index contributing to improvement in public health. For example, according to a recent survey it was found that the improvement in sport facilities in 2018 in USA decreased the problem of obesity to a considerable extent due to excercising.
According to the latter group, such clubs play very less significant role in public health. This could be because women population are very less interested in such recreational activities and finds little time for it. In such cases extra measures like creating awareness and setting up more health care facilities would be an alternative. For example, a recent study conducted in India revealed that majority of people who suffered a health issue belong to women category.
In conclusion, according to some people’s view setting up of such health units will benefit a community to a considerable extent and I do support their viewpoint. While others claim that it has very little effect on them and other measures are to be taken to alleviate such problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a healthy way" with adverb for "healthy"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...clubs help people spent their free time in a healthy way. This is because majority of population...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14487632509 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80181934853 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52296819788 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.9227016068 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.363636364 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7272727273 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252084372488 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100652609083 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577083602642 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165065581765 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253840246412 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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