how do you think movies and televisions can influence the behavior of ordinary people? give a specefic reasons and examples to support your idea.
It is necessary to be aware that, moves and television programs have a great impact on people’s behavior. some of these impressions are helpful while other are awful and have determined effects. This essay intends to illustrate some of the effects that movies and tv could have on behavior of a normal person.
In the first place a person’s mood is definitely influenced by movies and tv program. this is mainly because of our unconscious that may believe the events which happened in this virtual material. Some events would be depressing, others would be fun. for example, it is obvious that when most of us are watching terrible events, on the news channels, we would probably become depressed or unhappy and even are and even get scared such as rapes, murders or natural disasters, to name but name of few.
Furthermore, these tv programs can influence a person’s social behavior. This is in fact routed in human behavioral properties that may show their desire to intimate the reactions of main characters in movies, and even is sometimes naturally fallowed by misbehavior or aggressiveness. For the purpose of illustration, consider those films which contain the extension of immorality or betrayal. According to many family psychologists, being exposed to these things may set a stage or provide a context for the serious behavioral disorders.
Finally, these are many educational programs by which people can increase their knowledge some of the would be extremely beneficial to develop human’s life. For example, educational documentaries or some psychological program could grow our general knowledge in almost everything. So the person tries to behave based on findings in many aspect of his/her life.
To sum up, movies and tv programs can undoubtedly influence people’s behavior in many aspects. Impressing the mind, making impression on social behaviors and rising general knowledge are of importance that this virtual world can influence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, may, so, while, for example, in fact, such as, to sum up, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38019169329 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04646618574 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565495207668 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8466589825 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.25 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5625 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122228656095 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476739564861 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567649001859 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0806082943186 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509813202788 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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