Critical judgment of work in any given field has little value unless it comes from someone who is an expert in that field
In this modern era, due to the diverse thinking of people. Everyone has their own perspective, when they arrive at some some answer. They try to defend it, Eventhough, the premises behind the conclusion are not cogent and logical.
I agree with the author's conclusion that a judgement that is provided by the connoisseur has great value. However, there are abound cases which people have revolutionized the field. While they didn't attract much attention of public in their intial days, not considered as expects and if we consult a connoisseur everytime we face a problem it will make us feeble and we become dependent on the particular person. Our judiciousness also detiorates slowy as time passes by.
To begin with, a invidual attains immense respect, value from other peers of field and he is treated has a expert. Only when he is invented something innovative and has contributed highly in the advancement of the particular subject. Hence, considering this involvement people start realizing the value of his judgement and try seek advice from him when ever they feel it is necessarry. For instance, Newton was one of the most prominent and luminar personality of his time, all the others scientists before publishing their paper about some theory. They used to approach Newton for the evaluation and finding the accuracy of their inventions.
Secondly, we believe that experts are discrete from general public. They have this enhanced ability to think deeply and find mistakes that are not conspicous for an ordinary person. Since it understood that they have immense knowledge on the particular subject.
Lastly, most of the scenarios in life it is not possible to have an advice from an expert. Because, they are busy in their lifes and have their personal problems. Hence, we try to seek advice from our parents and close friends who we trust and believe that they wont inadvertently give an wrong advice to us. Morever, they have more knowledge than us due their maturity.
To sum up, The author's argument is convincing. Since, the experts of a particular subject mostly, have a better understanding towards the topic due their vast grip on the field. However, we cannot approach them everytime we face a problem and also be independent in making decisions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: some
...ir own perspective, when they arrive at some some answer. They try to defend it, Eventhou...
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Line 2, column 18, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...t cogent and logical. I agree with the authors conclusion that a judgement that is pro...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ve revolutionized the field. While they didnt attract much attention of public in the...
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Line 4, column 16, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...wy as time passes by. To begin with, a invidual attains immense respect, value...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...er peers of field and he is treated has a expert. Only when he is invented someth...
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Line 6, column 53, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... believe that experts are discrete from general public. They have this enhanced ability to thi...
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Line 6, column 183, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... not conspicous for an ordinary person. Since it understood that they have immense kn...
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Line 8, column 66, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'advice'.
Suggestion: advice
...rios in life it is not possible to have an advice from an expert. Because, they are busy ...
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Line 8, column 287, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...lieve that they wont inadvertently give an wrong advice to us. Morever, they have ...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'wrong advice'.
Suggestion: wrong advice
...lieve that they wont inadvertently give an wrong advice to us. Morever, they have more knowledg...
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Line 10, column 16, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...s due their maturity. To sum up, The authors argument is convincing. Since, the expe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 33.0505617978 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1905.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 377.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05305039788 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72428385446 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554376657825 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0388446893 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5909090909 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1363636364 23.4991977007 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116176137987 0.243740707755 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0364232655333 0.0831039109588 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563437848847 0.0758088955206 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0596588376199 0.150359130593 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346595463641 0.0667264976115 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 100.480337079 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.