Nowadays, there is a trend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive developments. Some people think it is harmful to individuals and to society. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
In these days media giving more concentration on problems and conflicts than developmental issues of the society. In my opinion, I agree with this statement that it has detrimental impacts on the people as well as the community.
First and foremost, cutting-edge technology and advancement in communicating devices provide easy access to the networking sites all over the world irrespective of the financial status of the concerned person. Mobile phone with internet connectivity creating rumors through social networking groups, which spreads like a bush fire in the community. Most of the users started believing in these fake news and sense of insecurity generates among common citizens. On the other hand, those people have made some scientific or cultural development in our lives, the media should highlight those issues to motivate others too.
Secondly, these activities encourage anti-social answers to create the situation of communal riots with vandalization acts. These acts slow down the economic growth of the particular country or nation and situation of anarchy break out among common citizens for their future prospects. For instance, a nonprofit organization conducted a survey to know the exact root cause of the riots then it comes in front that more than 95% disputes happened because of social networking sites and mobile chat groups those were based on the fake facts/popularity. Some self-help groups working for health enhancement by providing blood on a free call to a group member in any medical emergency.
Finally, these days we having watching incidents of committing suicides by farmers, but on the side some farmers playing a great role in contributing exports and production of the grains as well as cereals, Which making our nation self-dependent in the world. So this documentary may provide a direction to other farmers too.
In conclusion, instead of focusing on negative trends mass media should give attention to societal brotherhood and integrity in order to strengthen the nation in their financial fiasco era. The success of the nation depends upon the man force and unity of the people so communication in positive ways brings prosperity in the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, moreover, so, then, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45306122449 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99564031407 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65306122449 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6539823653 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.6 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.7 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0919726875961 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0360419921105 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453745775721 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0647334644372 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620596579687 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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