Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is argued by a significant number of individuals that broadcasting video screens have more downside influence on the behaviour of younger generations. I agree and believe that following and mimicking film stars by young people without knowing the side effects hampered them in a bad way.
To begin with, adolescents mimic the style and trend of their favourite stars and try to follow in real life which sometimes can be problematic for them. Theatre actions are carried out under control conditions and cinematic with top safety priority, however, youngsters who watch their stars on television often try to copy them in real life and develop criminal mentality. For instance, WWE sports played by sportsmen are moviemaking in control measures to entertain young individuals but children who watch these sports usually develop their mind towards these fighting stunts and apply on real-life and proven negative outputs rather than as a just entertaining.
Secondly, the rise in crime because of films and drama presented at big screens. Adult scenes and use of drugs in the movies often persuade people to believe that these things are possible in real life and increase the crime level in society. For instance, intake of alcohol and flirting with the actress by an actor in film scenes provides different ideas to young individuals and convinced them that such acts are allowed and possible especially in teenagers. In this way, the habit of these ill habits rise and crime level increases in the community.
In conclusion, there is no doubt that television and movies have more negative impacts on youngsters because of the above-mentioned reasons. Therefore, the government must control and scan these shows before broadcasting to the public.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24822695035 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74500153898 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59219858156 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.804387619 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.545454545 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6363636364 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164923806769 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601515175661 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057268261018 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104821679618 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486423056884 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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