It is argued that getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The important effect of getting married before finishing school or getting job is not a good choice which was always debatable has now become more controversal. The substantial influence of getting married before completing school has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend in recent year on getting marriage before finishing school or getting good job. It can be agreed that getting married before finishing school or without good job is very difficult for all which may create many problems in the family, society, country.
At the outset, there are numerous reason why getting married before school or good job is not a good option but the most conspicuous one steam's from the fact that before finishing school or getting good job people is immature they cannot take correct decision for life gaol due to lack of maturity. As an illustration, a current study shows in America ten couple were suffered from poverty due to getting married before finishing school and before getting good job and they become a street beggar in 2010. In addition, if a people got married early they will face many financial, social, economical etc problem in the society. Thus, getting marriage before school should strictly probhited by government.
Another key of justification for upholding the notion is that before getting good education getting married is very stressful to the couple which brings lots of family crisis in the family. Thus, every couple should set the goal and fulfill aim, after well settled then get married and enjoy happy married life.
From what has been discussed above can be concluded that the impact of early married before good job and education is prominent and people should be careful about married, after finishing study and good job they can planned the married.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 217, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'plan'
Suggestion: plan
...r finishing study and good job they can planned the married.
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, then, thus, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 298.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11744966443 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.435772414 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523489932886 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.5024630542 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.1183278567 50.4703680194 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.5 104.977214359 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8 20.9669160288 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 7.25397266985 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.496236294168 0.242375264174 205% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.242745601355 0.0925447433944 262% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109853580459 0.071462118173 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.317164776199 0.151781067708 209% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12420737642 0.0609392437508 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 12.6369458128 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 53.1260098522 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.3980295567 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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