Some people think that people will forget their own tradition and history because of they no longer wear their traditional costumes. Do you agree or disagree?
It is true that traditional customs are no longer preferred by most people Thus, it is widely believed to be a threat to a nation’s traditional values cultural identity,I believe that this tendency hardly contributes to the forgetting of tradition and customs of a nation.
On the one hand, there are variety of reasons why traditional clothes becomes obsolete. Firstly, the widespread popularity of competitive fashion market means the possibility of customs clothes being supersized by the modern is considerable high. If a person imposed to a competitive fashion makert with the advent of dozen of fashion brands , he or she will easily be swayed by it and ignore the traditional clothes. Secondly, the abandoning of traditional clothes is sometimes necessitated by the constant changing lifestyles among citizens.. Compared to traditional dress which is usually worn on special occasions, outfits in Western style suit many purposes ranging from daily activities to leisure or business purposes. For example, uniform and formal dress code are particularly designed for working spaces, schools, and many international seminars to represent mutual respect and equal rights rather than customary clothes. Another reason is that Western clothes are affordable yet still fashionable and high-quality since they are mass-produced by international clothing companies. For example, mid-range clothing brands such as Zara, H&M, Uniqlo locate their stores all over the world, thus offering a wide selections of up-to-date designs with an economical price.
On the other hand, people forgo traditional costums solely out of other considerations, it hardly contributes to forgetting their history and tradition. Apart from traditional clothes- a history reminder, there are various ways to broaden our offspring about customes, culture or even history such as history_a culturally valuable school subject or music. First of all, education always play an intergal part in teaching students about patriotism, culture and history. For instance, history will enable students to access to a world of knowledge include different fields such as history or customs. Another effective tool that help students to cherish the beauty of culture is music . As we know music always reflects literary and artistic heritage of a country,which help student to feel more connected to those intangible heritage of culture.
To sum up, we have to claim that not wearing customs clothes doesn't mean forgoing our history and customs. History and tradition should be borne in mind rather than merely put on our body
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2200.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54156171285 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95481600438 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604534005038 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 696.6 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1023865195 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.411764706 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3529411765 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.52941176471 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213405408935 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616153308479 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641441778477 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132828369912 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462263623862 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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