"Manned space flight is costly and dangerous. Moreover, the recent success of a series of unmanned space probes and satellites has demonstrated that a great deal of useful information can be gathered without the costs and risks associated with sending men and women into space. Therefore, we should invest our resources in unmanned space flight.
The argument shows that unmanned space is better and should invest the resources in unmanned space flight. However, there are many assumptions made by the editor of a national aeronautics magazine. The unstated facts have been provided by the editor which should be clear out.
Firstly, the editor states that manned space flight is costly and dangerous. there is no evidence given which shows that manned space flight is costly and dangerous. The editor should have given some stats or survey report which could substantiate the statement.
Secondly, it states that the recent success of a series of unmanned space probes and satellites has demonstrated that a great deal of useful information can be gathered without the costs and risks associated with sending men and women into space. But there is no proper evidence showing how they are actually getting success? Maybe it has other factors that are getting the unknown to the editor. there should be proper tests to find out the exact factors which involved success. Also it can be true that, success is only for a short period of time. they should wait long enough to find out that is it really going to be successful in long term.
In essence, the argument has many assumptions that are flawed. The editor has jumped to the conclusion without considering many factors.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 227, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s magazine. The unstated facts have been provided by the editor which should be c...
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Line 5, column 78, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...d space flight is costly and dangerous. there is no evidence given which shows that m...
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Line 9, column 398, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
... are getting the unknown to the editor. there should be proper tests to find out the ...
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Line 9, column 481, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...e exact factors which involved success. Also it can be true that, success is only fo...
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Line 9, column 535, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... true that, success is only for a short period of time. they should wait long enough to find o...
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Line 9, column 551, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...ess is only for a short period of time. they should wait long enough to find out tha...
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Line 9, column 635, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t is it really going to be successful in long term. In essence, the argument...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, however, may, really, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.6327345309 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.9520958084 62% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 13.6137724551 95% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 28.8173652695 52% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 55.5748502994 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 16.3942115768 43% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1121.0 2260.96107784 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 223.0 441.139720559 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0269058296 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.56307096286 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42556547093 2.78398813304 87% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 204.123752495 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533632286996 0.468620217663 114% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 705.55239521 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 22.8473053892 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.8513839867 57.8364921388 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0714285714 119.503703932 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9285714286 23.324526521 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 5.70786347227 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.25449101796 133% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395096037061 0.218282227539 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121090263927 0.0743258471296 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.176696734395 0.0701772020484 252% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190269605839 0.128457276422 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12926125095 0.0628817314937 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 14.3799401198 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.3550499002 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.197005988 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.5979740519 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.32208582834 93% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 98.500998004 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 12.3882235529 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.1389221557 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.9071856287 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.