Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Human beings are social animals. While some people believe that technology advancements are having negative impact on social life of humans, others think that it helps in increasing social interactions. This essay will discuss both view and provide evidence why I agree with those who think technology has positive impact on networking.
To begin with, modern technology platforms allows people to do networking online from the comfort of their home instead of going out and meeting in-person. There are numerous social networking websites, chat rooms, blogs wherein people connect with each other from their mobiles, laptops and desktops but these modes of communication leads to shallow friendships and relationships. For instance on festivities people nowadays send Whatsapp message to everyone as a formality without taking effort to call/write their friends/family or personally attending celebrations. As a result, new generation is suffering from loneliness, anxiety and depression more than any previous generation when there was no technology.
In contrast, technology has made distances disappear and people can connect with anyone at anytime. In this fast paced world, people move out of their home for studies or work thus mobiles/internet play a vital role in staying connected with friends and family. To illustrate, not only long-lost friends, colleagues can be contacted on Facebook and Linkedin but also people with similar interests can meet or make new friends. Furthermore, new modes of communication such as Skype, Whatsapp are bringing people closer as they can do video call to stay connected or develop their relationships without any barrier of distance.
In conclusion, although there are drawbacks of isolation using technology to build social connections, I would agree with those who believe technology has led to enhanced social life as it makes world a small place to connect with anyone, anywhere and anytime.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 519, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58724832215 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96313285211 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630872483221 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9813336946 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.75 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2059283939 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735503398318 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053383966336 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12300761891 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059449290696 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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