Some people say that the Internet is making the world smaller by bringing people together. To what extent do you agree that the internet is making it easier for people to communicate with one other?
People have different views about whether the Internet has increased significantly in the world that is making the world smaller by connecting people together. The boom of the Internet may bring about positive and negative impacts on people. In may opinion, I completely agree that.
On the one hand, those who support the internet is making the world smaller by bringing together. Firstly, now people are easier make a new friend than in the past. For example a American can add friend with a Vietnamese on the facebook or other social network. There are many couples who are make friend on the social network and then they have feeling for their friend and a happy wedding can take place. Secondly, everyone come from different countries, who can work together form any part of the world without face to face or go to the workplace.
One the other hand, despite the stance above, I think that the boom of the Internet may bring about negative impacts on interpersonal skill. For example, people spent long hours in the Internet without real interaction or enhance their interpersonal skill that tending to a mental illness such as autism. Secondly, many internet users have been victims of online scams, paying money for good or services that do not exist or are worthless.
While there are opinions from different perspectives on this topic, I believe that the internet is not a good place to find a new friend
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...I completely agree that. On the one hand, those who support the internet is ...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ew friend than in the past. For example a American can add friend with a Vietname...
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Line 5, column 287, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
... social network. There are many couples who are make friend on the social network and t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1187.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90495867769 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50458564479 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54132231405 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7388688519 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9166666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376030137163 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134554141632 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109021751881 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208845890416 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104213445245 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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