People in the current generation are not fit and active, and it will cause health problems in the future. What could be the reasons and suggest solutions for this issue.
Nowadays people are overweight and physically not active which can cause health issues years later. There are lot’s of reasons behind it but at the moment society should concentrate how to deal with this problem because it affect mostly younger generation.
Health and being active is very important in our life and it is so sad that people are ruining their life because they don't eat properly and don't bother to go and eat outside or cook at home. At the moment healthy and nutritious food is more expensive than fast food. It is easier to order online so people don't have to go restaurants and shops anymore. Unfortunately this can lead obesity, heart issues and diabetes, especially minors. For example 40% of USA children are reached to critical level of overweight and have diabetes because they don't go outside and sitting at home.
In our society normal weight and physical activity has become rare, because most people are slightly overweight and this have caused health issues. Best way how to stop this would increase all fast food chain prices or pay extra tax. For example European countries and also New Zealand want to increase sweets and fizzy drink prices, which is called 'sugartax'. Being fit is also important, family general practitioners should sent overweight patients to the gym or other physical activity for free.
Obesity is big problem in our society and there are solutions how to fix this problem but it all depends people themself. This can be fixed by sugar or fast food tax because main reason for this is cheap fast food.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91729323308 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38099063417 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567669172932 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4369761368 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.615384615 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.30769230769 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206104867378 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736336860743 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504156948662 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141002809023 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522216060634 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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