Adults do less exercise nowadays. Some think that people can be encouraged to live healthy lives through sporting events such as the Olympics or the World Cup. Others think that there are better ways to encourage adults for exercise. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
The people started moving towards the world of fitness. Everybody wants to be fit with a perfect figure. Even children started to think in the same manner. Exercising regularly will make our life healthy or else participating in a sporting event regularly can also help us to have a healthy life. Keeping our body fit is significantly important.
There is a common belief that exercising regularly will reduce the risk of death levels. People in all the age group can do an exercise based on the capability. Younger and old age people can do lite workout whereas, middle-age people can do the heavy workout. Gyms are also providing great offers to attract people. Recent research states that people exercising at least 15 minutes a day will tend to have a longer life. It will also help in keeping ourself young in the face and external appearance. We can do basic exercise in our home. So it will be the right choice for financially backward peoples too. Outdoor areas and courts are not needed for exercise even a small room is enough to do exercise.
Some people think that participating in sporting events is also needed to have a healthy life. Participating and winning in the events such as Olympics and world cup not only keep us healthy it will also earn pride to our nation. This thing had a dual benefit. But one drawback is that all the age people cant actively participate in the sporting events. For sporting events, we need to move out of the house and play. So there is a probability of getting some stress relief if we had any. There is a chance of meeting a lot of new people in a sporting event and also it will establish our network.
In conclusion, It depends on the people. Some people will love to do exercise some may not. On the other hand, some people will love it play games others may not. Everybody cant be a sports players. It purely depends on the people interest. Personally, I prefer exercising.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, whereas, at least, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64825581395 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55567898315 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508720930233 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8090401585 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.2222222222 106.682146367 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.7407407407 20.7667163134 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253847169983 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671946610863 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534560444113 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156715897804 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0185695292026 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 13.0946893788 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.8 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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