You are attending a night course in the school. you are not happy with some parts of the course. Write a letter to the school director about this.
In your letter, you should tell:
what course you are studying
what things you are not happy about
what you expect from the school director.
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing this email to express my dissatisfaction on some parts of the night course that I am attending in the school.
The subject of the course I am studying is "History and future of the automotive industry", which supposedly provides insights about important innovations in the past and how the industry will evolve in the future. However, during the course, I has noticed that the teacher hasn't given us any information about people who played key roles in the history of car design. At the same time, he hasn't provided us with any reference or documentation which we can look to get a vision about how the industry will become in the near future. Many of my classmates also have the same opinion like me.
Therefore, I would be obliged if you could consider to discuss with him about our concerns. he has a great sense of humor in the class and we has enjoyed listening to him, but the important thing to us is what knowledge we get from the course.
I look forward to having your soon reply and thank you for your time.
Your sincerely,
Nguyen Minh Tuan
- You are attending a night course in the school you are not happy with some parts of the course Write a letter to the school director about this In your letter you should tell what course you are studying what things you are not happy about what you expect 84
- You have bought an item of clothing at an online store. However, when the item arrived it was the wrong size and colour. Write a letter to the customer service manager of the company. In your letter•describe the problem•say how you feel about this• 73
- you were hurt in a minor accident inside the a super market, and you wish to complain to the supermarket.write a letter to manger of the super market. In your letter1. say who you are2. give details about the accident3. suggest how the supermarket could p 73
- You ordered a new chequebook from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing.Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the chequebook. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the man 87
- Some people are of the opinion that being highly qualified is the only way to ensure a well-paying job. While others believe that having work experience is the best way to get a well-paying job.Discuss both views and give your opinion. 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 256, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...e future. However, during the course, I has noticed that the teacher hasnt given us...
^^^
Line 7, column 285, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hasn't
... course, I has noticed that the teacher hasnt given us any information about people w...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 401, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hasn't
...ory of car design. At the same time, he hasnt provided us with any reference or docum...
^^^^^
Line 11, column 44, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'consider discussing'.
Suggestion: consider discussing
...refore, I would be obliged if you could consider to discuss with him about our concerns. he has a g...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 93, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...to discuss with him about our concerns. he has a great sense of humor in the class...
^^
Line 11, column 143, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...reat sense of humor in the class and we has enjoyed listening to him, but the impor...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69897959184 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69029504365 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632653061224 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.6594943088 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.333333333 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 4.34317383033 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201008780703 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733785348718 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668733126951 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133649730733 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551086903575 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.