Application for a job
Dear Mr Smith,
I have read about the new job announced on our official website for a new supervisor for our department. As I am keen to promote myself I would like to be considered for this job.
I have been worked in this job for more than 5 years and I think I had good experience with the nature of the job and I got aware of the important requirements needed for the promotion of the work.
We have multiple current problems having an impact on our production rate. For example the number of employees is too small and this put more duties on them. I think it is better to extend our employee skeleton with more determination of the job description of each of them.
Encouraging the connection between our company and other companies in the same field of work will promote the work size and help us getting benefits from working with different experiences.
Advertising our work is really an important point that we did not care about before, I think the advertisements will play an important role in attracting the costumers to our products.
I do hope you will consider me for this position and give me this opportunity. I promise I will do my best.
Best regards,
Maii
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 101, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e for anew supervisor for our department .As I am actually keen to promote myself ...
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Line 5, column 103, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...for anew supervisor for our department .As I am actually keen to promote myself I ...
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Line 9, column 161, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... got aware of the important requirements needed for promotion of the work. W...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...having an impact on our production rate.For example the number of employees is too ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... small and this put more duties on them.I think it is better to extend our employ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iption of each of them. Encouraging the connection between our company and ...
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Line 17, column 52, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the connection between our company and other companies in the same field of wor...
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Line 17, column 135, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to get' or 'get'.
Suggestion: to get; get
... will promote the work size and help us getting benefits from working with different ex...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...ant point that we did not care of before,I think the advertisements will play an ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...are of before,I think the advertisements will play an important role attracting t...
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Line 25, column 72, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... give me this opportunity and I promise i will do my best. Best regards, M...
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Line 31, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ll do my best. Best regards, Maii
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, really, so, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 991.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85784313725 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74810759395 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622549019608 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 16.3608247423 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.0343151737 44.8134815571 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.571428571 76.5299724578 185% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1428571429 16.8248392259 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 4.34317383033 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235923805798 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107377875101 0.0766984524023 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12239354835 0.0603063233224 203% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127621606107 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126881228455 0.0580467560999 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 8.37731958763 191% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 7.45979381443 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 8.54432989691 159% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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