The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbors.
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter
• Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly
• Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours
• suggest what should be done about the problem
I am writing to you in relation to the waste disposal system which is caused lots of difficulty for all residents of Grand Field district.
The number of rubbish bins installed in the area is not proportionate to the population of residential area. As you know, there is only one large waste bin for each complex which is always full and out of service; therefore, we have to deposit all waste around the bin on the street.
This situation not only does it attract lots of rodents and vermin but it may also cause spreading of disease and bad smell over the residential area. It would also affect our children who are playing on the pavements during their playing time.
I would like to suggest that some additional large waste bins should be erected in the Grand Field region. This solution not only may prevent domestic rubbish from been spread over the area but also can reduce both the amount of an unpleasant smell and the number of rodents and street dogs around our residence.
I appreciate your kind attention to this important issue as you know the high summer is coming soon.
Yours faithfully,
Mostafa Asadi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 285, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...all waste around the bin on the street. This situation not only does it attract ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7614213198 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.410349848 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609137055838 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.5184174821 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.222222222 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 4.34317383033 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167558912985 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711395961078 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493569294581 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859429554023 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039090329592 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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