Many sports players are advertised in sports products. Do you think advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
There is no gainsaying the fact that an increasing number of sportspersons are endorsing a bunch of sports products these days. In my opinion, while there are certain drawbacks of this trend, I personally feel that its benefits far outweigh these drawbacks.
At the outset, the most obvious disadvantage of marketing sports products with the help of sports players is that the small-scale businesses usually struggle to compete with the large-scale businesses in the market. This is mainly because the prominent sportsperson endorsement is extremely expensive, and majority of the large-scale businesses have the marketing budget to afford it. However, almost all the small-scale business cannot pay a hefty amount of payments to sports players to advertise their products, and their products, in spite of good quality, fail to attract enough buyers.
Despite the disadvantage mentioned above, I believe that the trend of sportsperson endorsement for sports products promotion is more advantageous. The biggest advantage of this trend is that it helps to promote the idea of participating in various games. What I mean by this is that if an athlete appears in any advertisement of any sport product, more and more people tend to buy that product and they are motivated to play sports. Another considerable advantage of this trend is that it motivates other players to perform better. When companies pay a handsome amount of money to the players who are famous because of their performances, other players who are playing same sports will feel motivated, and they will try to perform better so that they can also attract other companies for endorsement.
In conclusion, I recognize the possible demerit of making sports players to promote sports products, but it seems to me that we gain more than we lose from this trend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, i mean, in conclusion, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23728813559 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92439245723 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535593220339 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.5204225554 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.454545455 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8181818182 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353915098447 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133947510435 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584578490005 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20624850598 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477857463794 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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