Life was better when technology was simpler. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Better was the way of living when machines were not much complicated. This essay disagrees with the above statement because with the revolution of technology countless lives are being saved and also that wireless communication has enhanced the way of being in touch with the loved ones.
The primary reason cutting-edge technology has made life better is its applications in medicine. In the bygone era, it was difficult to diagnose the diseases which were epidemic and contagious in nature such as the growth of cancerous cells and tumors in the body. Now the lab-technicians can precisely and accurately scan and diagnose such conditions using robots, that is, artificial intelligence. Moreover, the medical experts and scientists can perform high-risk complicated surgeries effectively and efficiently leaving behind the thought of unsuccessful ones. So.numerous lives are being potentially safeguarded. The Guardian, for instance, recently published that the Scottish surgeons are making the use of AI robots in the treatment of the early stages of lung cancer in infected patients with 75% more precision and are 50% faster when compared with 5 medical experts.
Another reason life became simpler with the advent of technology is, now its easier to communicate remotely using devices including mobile phones, laptops, and tablets. Hence, with a single tap of a finger via satellite we connect to distant relatives and friends and can do video calling, leaving behind the remote usage of voice conversations. Skype, Imo, and WhatsApp are various video calling apps that enable individuals, such as the grandparents residing in far-off places, to soothe their eyes by watching their grandkids crawl, toddle or play around. For example, according to a recent survey, 90% of UK citizens use video-calling apps rather than audio call options to interact with their friends.
In conclusion, the developing technology is assuring mankind to lead a better life because individuals can live longer using medicinal technology besides they can enjoy high-level communication with near and dear ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, hence, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1786.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51234567901 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92836018966 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3655081737 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.384615385 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9230769231 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15339005604 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549685007794 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632689824223 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959255838345 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317273658934 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.53 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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