Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
It is true that majority of people like to stay in the same company because they are comfortably settled in their workplace wheareas other opine that to experience new environment it is better to work for diverse companies. I personally favour the former perspective; however, my essay shall dwell upon both the viewpoints in the subsequent paragraphs followed by a reasoned conclusion.
To begin with, there are various benefits of staying in the same job. Firstly, people who work for the same firm in their entire life more understand their work because they have good understanding of their work. Secondly, people got higher salary who work in same organisation and also they are emotionally attached with company. Due to devoted to office masses have feeling of home. Lastly, chances of getting promotion is higher for that people who stay in same job as they value experience and also received bonus. For instance, my aunt working in the same company for 10 years, now she promoted and got the position of manager. So working in the same company have various advantages.
On the other hand, some individuals opine that changing jobs is good way to experience new opportunities and get to know different people. Because of changing jobs person experience new environment and also enjoyed their life happily. Moreover, people like to experience changes so they work in different organisations and they also think that staying in the same firm is not a good way because they opine that staying in same job they might be bored. When they change their jobs then they feel relaxed and also make new friends.
According to my perspective, it is better to stay in same job to get promotion and understand their jobs. There are various benefits to stay in same company such as bonus, promotion, incentives and health insurance.
To conclude, although working in different companies has some benefits , in my opinion, I believe that one who works for the same company the rest of their life has more chances to be promoted and good amount of salary.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, such as, in my opinion, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1720.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98550724638 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65918571544 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.460869565217 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6673783597 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.5 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5625 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5625 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341137855999 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12414927654 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103706146185 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206433557793 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0986147362873 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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