Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence, while others think that intelligence can be measured in other ways. What is your opinion?
Some people think that intelligence can be a good indicator to success, while others have no doubt that there are various ways to measure the intelligence. I strongly believe that success can be measured by some other ways, because intelligence in not an adequate factor for success.
To begin with one of the factors that measuring success other than intelligence. The majority of people who have the ability to cope with the variables in their lives, and can deal with the challenges that they may face in both practical and social life, such people, even if they did not meet their expectation, they can start over. This factor is considered as a type of success. For instant, Mahatma Ghandi, one of the most successful people because he was able to deal with the challenges he faced to redeem the independence for his country .In brief, coping with changes and the ability to deal with the challenges can be a good indicator to success.
In addition to what mentioned, People who are seen as resilient characters tend to be a more successful persons, because they have the flexibility to change the surrounding environment they live in or work at. The reason is that they can adopt the changes of their circumstances. Furthermore, people whom are keen on achieving their tasks precisely, have the consistency and conscious in fulfilling their goals, such people are very successful persons. In brief, diligence and perseverance can form a great success.
In conclusion, the intelligence is not the only standard for measuring success, however there are other standers should be considered. In my opinion, the important factors that can form success are coping with the variables, resilience, and the diligence in achieving tasks in addition to the intelligence can form the success.
The local community wanted to get involved with a recycling program, They knew that the alternative was building another landfill. The city council met in a special session, then they decided to get bids for curbside services from the two local companies and the three companies outside the city. The bids were all unfortunately about the same amount so the council decided to sign a 10-year contract with one of the local companies. The company chosen, had been a part of the community for almost 20 years and it had a sterling reputation for its dependability. The members of the community have overwhelmingly, supported the new program that they are excited about contributing to their community and the environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2140.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 415.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15662650602 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89150200732 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498795180723 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 658.8 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8890306085 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.882352941 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4117647059 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58823529412 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.123555551938 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146242916851 0.0667982634062 219% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237919934086 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.20001225909 0.056905535591 351% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.