Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment—doing things they like to do rather than doing things they should do.
The famous poetry of Jonh Donne says "no one is an entire island in itself, everyone it is a piece of the continent, part of the main". In this sense, I personaly believe that people today spend too much time on personal enjoyment rather than doing things they should do. This is because concept o good lifestyle changed in over 40 years and because nowadys the people are become more selfish.
In 60's century a definition of a good life was have a big house with a beautiful family and an excellent job. So, the people achieve this concept of life with a lot of virtues, such as responsability.
However, the concept o a good lifestyle changed in 40 years. Curretly, the people spend a lot o time doing things that will not be productive for society. Moreover, this change of view of lifestyle generated a lack of virtues between people.
A lot o people spend too much time on personal enjoment, but no one can live by ourself. The perception that we are a entire island in itself, do the people be selfish. In addition, is necessary to known that we live in society and we need to help each other. In this sense, dedicate much time for personal pleasures is close our eyes to the problems of the world.
Personal pleasures, such as enjoyment is necessary, but with moderation. The changed of the meaning of lifestyle nowadays, changed the relationship and priority between people. In addition, people spend too much time in personal enjoyment rather than provide a better society.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 48, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...century a definition of a good life was have a big house with a beautiful family and...
^^^^
Line 6, column 117, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... by ourself. The perception that we are a entire island in itself, do the people ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 1977.66487455 63% => OK
No of words: 262.0 407.700716846 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73664122137 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65058405408 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 212.727598566 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 618.680645161 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.8585350734 48.9658058833 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.7333333333 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4666666667 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46666666667 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334492632988 0.236089414692 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114163787071 0.076458572812 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.169613720569 0.0737576698707 230% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175893329242 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0944788901089 0.0645574589148 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 48, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...century a definition of a good life was have a big house with a beautiful family and...
^^^^
Line 6, column 117, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... by ourself. The perception that we are a entire island in itself, do the people ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 1977.66487455 63% => OK
No of words: 262.0 407.700716846 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73664122137 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65058405408 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 212.727598566 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 618.680645161 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.8585350734 48.9658058833 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.7333333333 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4666666667 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46666666667 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334492632988 0.236089414692 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114163787071 0.076458572812 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.169613720569 0.0737576698707 230% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175893329242 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0944788901089 0.0645574589148 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.