Artists need certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity. Some people think that artist should have total to express any thoughts and ideas. To what extant do you agree or disagree?
People's opinion differ whether artists should have full autonomy to demonstrate any sort of views and ideas or not. Though there are some robust altercation but personally I confide that as a citizen of independent country an artist has the right to illustrates his thoughts. I feel this for a few reasons which I shall scrutinize in the subsequent essay.
First of all, obviously, there are some feasible cause why people might argue that there should be a restriction for an artist to show his opinion trough arts. This is because sometimes they misuse the freedoms which contaminate the environment of society. Owing to which, chaos is created.
On the other hand in spite of the above argument, I shall support the view that artists should let free to express their ideas and thoughts. The first and foremost reason to support this opinion is, if artists are allowed to demonstrate them freely then they can do their job in ease. We all know art has an integral part of human life as arts motivates us and boosts our strength to focus on our study or job. By following an artist we cab avoid a mischievous way to lead our life. Art also abolish our stress and in order to acquire that we need to give the liberty to an artist to follow his passion towards it. It is also found on study that inhabitant who admire art is tented to better concentrator on their daily routine life.
By the way of conclusion, having a total autonomy of an artist certainly have some drawbacks but it seems to me that the merits are outweighed in the long run than its demerits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, i feel, sort of, by the way, first of all, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61071428571 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50906265529 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592857142857 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8358706877 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3076923077 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247064971863 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812623991134 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691036337551 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149555454874 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282410479706 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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