Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
As the globalization is on its upsurge, more and more individuals are eager to work and live in oversea countries, which raises a claim that it can trigger detrimental social as well as practical diploma. I am totally inclined to support this idea due to some reasons.
With regards to social problems, I believe that the higher oblige on speaking a foreign language is in line with the lower threshold of facing culture shock that is related to psychological issues. To begin with, the human is thought to live and integrate better if they belong to certain groups and communities that share the similarities in thoughts and behaviors; yet, living among foreigners who speak a totally different language can build up a restriction to get along well since one language is closely connected with one distinguishable culture. Later on, this difference in culture leads to the depression whose symptom is feeling self-conscious, causing the higher possibility of giving up the attempt to immerse ourselves on the local society.
Another supporter for this is that the separated features in language may decay our competitiveness in the job market. There would be no companies or corporations agreeing to hire employees who cannot be able to acknowledge the native language. Even if those white-collar workers are welcomed, they will get a higher risk of being seriously criticized for making rudimental mistakes in using the language. To be worse, some people may cope with physical problems including abuse, violence and discrimination in their workplace due to their not fluently speaking the native language.
To summarize, settling a life in a country in which the local citizens speak a different language from ours comprises certain issues in connection with psychology and physical condition. However, I believe that if we are determined and industrious enough, we can still be able to overcome all of those aforementioned problems.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, still, well, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1796.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22093023256 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02005644667 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572674418605 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.1382630376 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.153846154 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4615384615 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.410686326847 0.244688304435 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136165150345 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.159936248471 0.0667982634062 239% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245289428888 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.26003786703 0.056905535591 457% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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