Every individual in a society has the responsibility to obey laws and to disobey and resist unjust laws.
Laws are a set of principles that define the limits and powers of an individual inside an organisation. Laws are meant to ensure peaceful and ethical functioning of the organisation. Laws provide a comprehensive set of procedures to settle disputes in a way that ensures fairness to all. Laws must provide an equal opportunity to everyone to express their thoughts and thus I feel that laws must be strictly followed and voice must be raised against law enforcing agencies if misuse of power is taking place.
When human communities started to emerge, it was felt that a system of laws were required to settle grievances in a way that does not encroach upon the rights of others. Thus over time governance evolved from tribal heads to rulers to an elected government. The purpose of a government is to ensure the welfare of the citizens. It must pass laws to ensure peace and harmony in the society. Thus it becomes the responsibility of every individual living to accept and obey laws passed by the governing body.
Secondly, since the people elect the government, they have the right to question and demand reforms from the elected government. As the popular saying by Abraham Lincoln goes, 'the government is of the people, by the people and for the people', the citizens have a right to demand reforms from the government, as with changing times the needs of people change and a successful government is one which takes into account all the pros and cons of the demands of people and passes the required amendments.
It is quite common that power leads to corruption. Concentrating power in the hands of a few can lead to misuse and eventually conversion to dictatorship. For example, in Germany, the people did not pay attention to the misuse of power by Hitler but when they did and started questioning, he crushed everybody who stood against him. Thus it is the responsibility of the citizens to demand answers for the reforms made by the elected government. It is the responsibility of the citizens to stay vigilant and know their basic rights to question and take a stand against any oppressive law that tries to harm the well-being or goes against the legal framework of the country.
All in all, since the people choose their leaders, it is also their responsibility to ensure that the authority is doing what they were elected for and not manipulating the legal framework for their own greed. Only vigilant people make a better country.
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- Every individual in a society has the responsibility to obey laws and to disobey and resist unjust laws 62
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...thical functioning of the organisation. Laws provide a comprehensive set of procedur...
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Line 1, column 289, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... in a way that ensures fairness to all. Laws must provide an equal opportunity to ev...
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Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...not encroach upon the rights of others. Thus over time governance evolved from triba...
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Line 3, column 391, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...nsure peace and harmony in the society. Thus it becomes the responsibility of every ...
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Line 7, column 334, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...rushed everybody who stood against him. Thus it is the responsibility of the citizen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2039.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 420.0 442.535393258 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85476190476 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80088563091 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469047619048 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 644.4 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.8914580023 60.3974514979 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.277777778 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 5.21951772744 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193190398489 0.243740707755 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688388870044 0.0831039109588 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876614943733 0.0758088955206 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105986400815 0.150359130593 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0951897172187 0.0667264976115 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.