Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Each indivuals has their own ways to deal with their life. Some of them believe that by accepting bad situation such as a dead-end job or the lack of money, their life will be fine. Others argue that by trying hard to improve such situations, it will be better. In fact, both views have their point but I am on the side of the second opinion.
For many people, it’s OK for them to accept that bad situation. Maybe they are too old to adapt to the change of the world. On the other hand, they may come from country, mountainous area, or from the fishing villages, so the chance for them to improve their life is nearly nothing. They are illiterate, poverty, and only living from hand to mouth. They have no dream, or no chance to reach their dream. So they have to accept such bad situtation.
But citizen students like me are different. Our tools to access the world is fully eqquiped, our financial support from parents are excellent, and we are the future of the world, as Uncle Ho say that. So it’s a shame if we say that we “have” to accept our life because we want to. I belive that if we have meet bad situation in our life, it’s normal and we have to try better in order to overcome it. In fact, many celebrities were born in a inaffluence family, they have tried their best to reach their dream and successfully, such as Ronaldo, Walt Disney, Abraham Lincoln and many more.
In my opinion , although it is common for people to accept their situations, but in order to advance in career and succeed in life, they should overpower the obstacles and work hard.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 441, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... Lincoln and many more. In my opinion , although it is common for people to acc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, second, so, in fact, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45017182131 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31675740858 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553264604811 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2036289479 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9375 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1875 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210188352002 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738665064315 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859044125047 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133781136024 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103358371758 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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