Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good while others think there are disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Financing in sports is a more prominent way to the company advertisement. A few individuals think that it is acceptable whilst others disagrees and think it is bad practice. I agree with former one and in this essay i will discuss both views.
To begin with the first notion, there are myriad things to be shared in its favor. Firstly, if companies sponsoring a sports event, it will grow the reputation of the organization due to increasing the number of sales. Also, they can showcase their products to the event. To exemplify this, on the basis of a survey done by Bangladesh Sports in 2019, around 950 companies were spending more than 300 core take to promote their products. Last but not least, organisations can link their name to successful players; it is not only good exposure to the business but also its brand.
However, there are some inevitable drawbacks associated. To start with, awful publicity is always never welcome which is harmful to public health such as tobacco and liquor. To take an example, if some famous performers negative behavior of taking any alcohol, it will not only spoiling the status of the participant but also an image of the company. For an instance, there was a report published by The New Age in 2018 which stated that nearly 60% of renowned players were drinking too much liquor throughout the country. Therefore, unacceptable marketing can destroy the teenager life.
To sum up, although there is a huge business for companies where they advertise more events, it is unfavorable for the youth of the nation as they are promoting products such as tobacco and liquor
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...agree with former one and in this essay i will discuss both views. To begin with...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'take' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'takes'.
Suggestion: takes
...panies were spending more than 300 core take to promote their products. Last but not...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires base form of the verb: 'spoil'
Suggestion: spoil
...of taking any alcohol, it will not only spoiling the status of the participant but also ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, as to, such as, to begin with, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86545454545 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69428780513 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618181818182 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.991336378 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5714285714 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164436091315 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516802975881 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532875474729 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972657427395 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776665426866 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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