University students should made to wear uniforms. Do you agree?
It is commonly known that wearing a uniform is compulsory in most public schools. Meanwhile, some students do not like to wear a dress because it feels not really comfortable. Moreover, as the more mature someone is, they want to feel free to express themselves. Some people believe that university students are required to wear uniforms. However, in my opinion, it is strongly disagreed that university students should wear uniforms because it is not comfortable and expensive.
First of all, uniforms in the university is not compulsory because it is not comfortable. The majority of university students wants to express themselves through what they wear and not wearing the same clothes every day. For example, university students are more mature than school students. Therefore, they know what clothes are suitable for them, such as wearing a hoodie, sweatshirt, and so on. However, the university has to make sure that what students wear are looks good and proper in learning. In short, wearing uniform in a college is not comfortable.
Secondly, wearing a uniform will cost more money. Paying a tuition fee might be burned for people who have a low income. For instance, if wearing a suit is required in university, students should spend more money to purchase it. Also, many poor people can not receive a higher education because of this issue and it may impact to the small number of educated people in some counties. In brief, students should not wear uniforms because it is expensive.
In conclusion, it is strongly disagreed that university students are required to wear uniforms because of the two convincing reasons mentioned above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, for instance, in brief, in conclusion, in short, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12592592593 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75750876614 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496296296296 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7168112171 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4117647059 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8823529412 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7647058824 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39056899939 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151859736525 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0950846934415 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260856364375 0.151304729494 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561422800626 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.