Write about the following topic:
At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In modern times, the issue of demographic features of a country has become increasingly important and highly controvesial. There are those who say that population with huge number of young adults beneficial to the nation which they belong, however others believe that countries full of elder people have real advantage. In this essay, I will examine the benefits and downsides of this issue and provide my overall opinion.
From an overall perspective, there is a number of reasons why people think that young population is beneficial to their country. Perhaps, the main reason of this idea is that young people have too much energy to work for their country. As a result, they are able to improve their nations for years but older people are not because they have limited time to live. As a result, young people are the hope of their country to achieve goals of the society. Another advantage of having young generation is that young people are more creative than older people so they are the most appropriate candidates to develop plethora of new technological devices, computer codes and mobile applications.
Despite these arguments, there is also a case for the idea that young generation is not beneficial to their country or society. First, they have no time to improve their skills to make their country a better place because of wasting their time with surfing on the internet. Unlike in the past, young people today spend their time on computer games, social media and chat sites rather than working in a library or making a research for a scientific phenomenon. Secondly, they have no experience and confidence to make an invention. A good illustration of this is that scientist make their observations in their older ages because they have anough experience to observe a scientific founding or invent a new device.
In conclusion, it must be said that having more young people compared to older people has clear advantages and disadvantages. Having considered both sides of this issue, in my opinion, the population of a country which consists of more young people than old people has more advantage than disadvantage. To recapitulate, if a country has a massive young generation, it has enough hope for the future to improve itself because it has fresh brains to make it real.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 421, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...her than working in a library or making a research for a scientific phenomenon. Secondly, ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1915.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98697916667 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71389528046 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479166666667 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4241510669 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.6875 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242904727868 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935000819439 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049415742043 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166220266338 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445313741793 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.