Some people say History is one of the most important subject in school. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History.
Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Nowadays people's views often clash on the notion that history is one of the most important subject. While some who worries for the future believe that, in today's world subjects like science and technology are more important than history.
In today's contemporary world science and technology stand on the strongest footings as compared to other subjects in school. As developments are taking place at a great pace and the fuel to the engine of development is abundance knowledge of science. In addition to it, resources are also getting exhausted which necessitates the discovery of alternatives to cope with the situation which also boots the value of technology. Furthermore, diversification and innovation embraces development and they are only possible if an individual has basket full apprehension of science and technology else development will become a seldom sight.
On the contrary, other part of the population believes the notion that history is the most essential school subject. However, it is often said that learning history gives one experience which prevents repeating the same mistakes in near future. Moreover, it is quite significant fact that learning and knowing the history of the place and civilization in context to better understand the place and it's salient features is a great virtue. Probing further, the scoring nature of this subject also adds up in it's value in school as it only deals with mugging up the things in brain rather than investing a lot of time in understanding the concepts.
However, in my opinion I strongly believe that success can only be witnessed if one focus on the future developments rather than dealing with historical dates and events. We can not alter the past but we can surely prepare for the future. Thus science flows parallel to such concept. So science and technology are more prominent subjects in school as compared to history.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 116, Rule ID: WORRY_FOR[1]
Message: The verb 'worry' does not normally take the preposition 'for'. Did you mean 'worries about'?
Suggestion: worries about
... most important subject. While some who worries for the future believe that, in todays worl...
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Line 6, column 239, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...t we can surely prepare for the future. Thus science flows parallel to such concept....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, thus, while, in addition, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18181818182 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84346638147 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548701298701 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9693781868 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361865749835 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123054827407 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124923798931 0.0667982634062 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23150066346 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.165398445734 0.056905535591 291% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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