A friend has offered you some work in his company. You are currently employed and not able to start for three months.
Write a reply to your friend. In your letter:
Give details of what you know about his company
Explain your current situation
Give your answer to the offer and explain why
Hey Camille,
It’s nice to hear from you! It’s been a while since we saw each other, how are you?
To be completely honest with you, I’m quite surprised by this offer. The last time we spoke, you told me you really wanted to hire a marketing manager to focus on your branding, but you didn’t think your finances could handle it at the time. I’m glad that you’re finally expanding the business! Seems like you’re really doing well, huh?
I’m really flattered that you’re offering me this job and I would gladly accept! I’ve seen how much passion you have for this and how much it’s grown. I would love to be a part of it! I already have a lot of things in mind that we can work on!
However, there is one problem though, I’m currently tied up. My contract doesn’t end until three months from now, do you think you can wait that long? Let me know what you think.
Sincerely,
Ashley
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 152, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... have for this and how much it’s grown. I would love to be a part of it! I alread...
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Line 7, column 185, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...grown. I would love to be a part of it! I already have a lot of things in mind th...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, really, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 759.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57228915663 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09795156852 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.71686746988 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.0869308043 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.875 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 4.34317383033 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264157014417 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106060912649 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600656912279 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155242544935 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585285418357 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.72 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.