Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There is a prevailing view that leaning history is the most important among plenty of courses, while others argue that it’s more essential to learn subjects like science and technology.
It seems plausible to consider history as the most important course in school, as it keeps a comprehensive record of events experienced in the past. In other words, it’s very instrumental for pupils to know about what the human society has gone through, because there is numerous invaluable experience that can be concluded. In addition, students can acquire a deeper understanding of their own nation’s culture by learning history. For example, a number of people are unable to illustrate the origins of their country’s festivals, which can be certainly found from the history book, thus leading to a better culture identity.
The opposing view, however, states the importance of science and technology compared with history. Since science and technology play an increasingly essential role in the progress of contemporary society, there is no doubt that they have a really important position. Besides, science and technology can provide pupils with tremendous opportunities in terms of future career. Nowadays, job applicants who master some IT skills will be preferred by recruiters since these skills can be conducive to improve the efficiency when doing repetitive tasks. Therefore, science and technology at school can bring a more promising career to students.
For my personal view, I would say they are equally important, as history gives pupils a better understanding of their country and science and technology make students more competitive and can find jobs easily from the perspective of career.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, really, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in addition, no doubt, of course, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45112781955 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92497631794 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609022556391 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4534545324 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.818181818 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1818181818 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4545454545 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283054286208 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103194314123 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770948575731 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178081183845 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684118513458 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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