The chart below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. (3 pie charts)
sodium breakfast 14% lunch 29% dinner 43% snack 14%
saturated fat breakfast 16% lunch 26% dinner 37% snack 21
added sugar breakfast 16% lunch 19% dinner 23% snack 42%
The pie charts illustrates the proportions of three of the daily minerals in take of American. All of which could be calamitous if consumed more than allowed amount.
Overview, USA citizens consumption of sodium and saturated fat most through dinner with 43% and 37% accounted for each respectively. However, the largest count of sugar added with over 40%, is surprisingly ingested from people snacking habits. breakfast was recorded to have the lowest percentage of all charts.
Followed dinner, the rates of both sodium and saturated fat consumption for lunch are amounted to the second highest with 29% and 26% in that order. A contrast was that breakfast and snacks have an equal number of sodium consumption. Nevertheless, the latter one is responsible for a lot higher proportions in the remaining two alimentaries reported.
Added sugar chart has a fairly opposite ratios to the other two charts. The make up for it was 42% from snacks, 23% from evening meals, 19% from afternoon bites and 16% from morning feed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.125 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78870794577 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672619047619 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5067915825 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0704738436642 0.215688989381 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0320965962337 0.103423049105 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403654931298 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0514199511893 0.15604864568 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558798848896 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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