The maintenance of public libraries is a waste of money because of computer technologies that have the same function.
Some people thinks that preserving public libraries are just a waste of money, since the modern technology such as computer can be used as a subtend for reading books. I disagree with this belief.
First of all, in the university a lot of students go to the library to study for their exams. And it is a place that is convenient for people to gather and work together. In addition the environment of library is very quite, which could help students and other people to concentrate on their activities. Not only the place, but also books help them to gain knowledge and more interesting and available information. Furthermore ,libraries provide wide range of books for people to select which is very convenient and meaningful for readers and they do not have spend money for buying books, since libraries system are borrowing books
.Secondly, considering about people who do not have computer or internet access at home, library is important in this case as long as they find information to help their needs. For example ,people who have financial difficulties to buy computer or pay the internet can use the facilities in the library. Moreover, some elders are not able to use computer so it is good to have libraries for elders to improve their knowledge.
To conclude, although the internet has made the information readily available, books are still the most trusted source of information as they are written by well known academicians and researchers. Hence, the government should continue to spend money on the mount of public libraries as these are important sources of knowledge.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: addition,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, well, for example, in addition, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98120300752 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76426247678 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552631578947 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 90.0990272464 49.4020404114 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.454545455 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1818181818 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1818181818 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214338253877 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767343220927 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787221861924 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139553826809 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586906108697 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.