In many cities there is little control on the design and construction of new homes and office buildings, and people can build houses in their own style. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a situation?
People have different views about if buildings and blocks should be built under strict regulations. In my opinion, although these constructions can bring some advantages for individuals and businesses, the negatives of them outweigh its benefits in many ways.
On the one hand, designing homes based on one's architectural preferences has several benefits. For those who have a good taste of designation, it would be unfair to force them to live in the same architectural structure as everyone else. If they can organize their own houses and offices, they are more likely to gain a sense of satisfaction and achievement. Moreover, buildings with unique and impressive structures may contribute more tourist attractions to the city, which draws a million visitors annually. This leads to new job opportunities and to boost the city's economy.
However, the construction without a unity design may cause massive drawbacks to both the city and its citizens. First, less regulation can violate housing safety. If the authorities do not tend to supervise the building process, there would be houses with poor conditions which are not safe enough for people to live in. Second, some skyscrapers that are too high may block out the sunlight and ruin the overall layout of the area. Finally, the government will be struggling in doing maintenance work since each style of construction requires a different time and way of maintenance, which costs a lot of money and work.
In conclusion, while I agree that people should build their houses on their own ideas, on the other hand, I believe that the local authority needs to introduce a few regulations to protect the pleasant look of the city.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, so, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10869565217 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90296764915 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652173913043 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4772197346 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.461538462 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267548883291 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776168049088 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445462368426 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150137551457 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0110853512834 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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