Some people say that learning online is the best way to learn whereas some claim that it is still better to attend a class with a teacher. Discuss both sides of the argument and then give me your opinion?
Nowadays, online classes are more and more popular over the world. Many people believe that these virtual classes will replace school campuses because of their outstanding benefits, while others argue that offline classes still keep their unique roles in the education. In my opinion, walk-in class is the best no matter how useful remote one is.
On the one hand, I believe that studying in classes under the guidance of teachers is always the best way for students to obtain knowledge. In a class, teachers often apply various teaching methods such as making pop quizzes, telling funny jokes relating to lessons to help students engage in lectures and pay attention at best. Moreover, some scientific experiments shows that when students recall their memory in exams, they often think much about events that happened in a classroom. Therefore, creative teaching methods plus the interaction with teachers prove to be helpful as these things leave strong impressions about the content of the lessons and make them last longer in the student’s brain. These advantages are the reasons why offline classes outweigh virtual ones.
However, under the threat of the Covid 19 pandemic, remote classes seem to be a better choice for learners. As we may know, the disease outbreak causes nationwide shutdown in many countries over the world and interferes daily activities of people. Students are not excluded the severe impacts of the pandemic since they cannot go to their campuses due to social distancing rules. With a big effort to lessen the negative effects to the education system, all classes are changed to be virtual so that students can complete the program in time. During this time, the biggest benefit that online classes bring about is the very creating a safe learning environment for students.
In conclusion, the walk-in class plays the best part in educating people and it cannot be replaced by any other educational forms. However, in the pandemic, the online classroom is a better way for students as it enables students to continue their educational path with the maximum of safety.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13702623907 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49814251559 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594752186589 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5142888409 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.466666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8666666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17989544039 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057920453453 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316577916056 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107665881841 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0141592156424 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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