In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular.
Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular?
What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?
Nowadays, shows and novels related to delinquencies have become extremely renowned among the general mass. While some people watch these for solely entertainment purpose, others view them as learning lessons so that they can stay safe from dangers.
To begin with, the programs and stories related to crimes are popular for a number of reasons. They provide a source of thrill and entertainment for the people such as who could be the possible culprit or how did the crime happen? Furthermore, some people take lessons from these crimes and tries to remain wary of such situations in real life. For instance, if it was shown that walking alone in the streets could attract unwanted attention and may lead to potential danger, women try to walk in places with more people in order to avoid falling into the same situation.
However, I strongly believe that the stories and programs are for entertainment purpose only. There are very rare instances when the stories portrayed are taken from real incidents. Besides, most of them are fabricated from tit and bits of stories published in the newspaper and the rest is written by a professional script writer to make the stories appear closer to the real incident in order to gain more audience. Although this may have a detrimental effect on people who are sensitive to such social issues or those with certain psychological disorders, it can be avoided with proper guidance. For example, an autistic child might see an episode where a person is being murdered with a knife and may inevitably react to seeing knives around their homes. They can be kept away from watching these kind of programs.
To recapitulate, I would like to reiterate that the crime fiction novels and TV crime dramas are solely for entertainment purpose and should not be taken extremely seriously. Additionally, the people who can be negatively impacted by these should not be allowed to watch or read them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 795, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...es. They can be kept away from watching these kind of programs. To recapitulate, I would ...
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Line 4, column 285, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d not be allowed to watch or read them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, however, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96604938272 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64451785756 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58024691358 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6623980031 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.928571429 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156514433799 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574122394791 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801057266769 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10585602623 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768450670828 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.