Few people think, a lot of essential to plant more trees in open areas in rural and cities than give more housing.
What extent do you agree or disagree?
In this era, lots of crucial to plant more trees in the open area. Few people think, a lot of essential to plant more trees in open areas in rural and cities than give more housing. I properly agree with that statement and I will describe some positive points.
Firstly, it is significant to plant more trees in this era, because if you do not plant trees so carbon-dioxide level may be high. Secondly, we are plant trees in open areas so that they give woods and any other sources. Lastly, the most important thing is trees give oxygen to people and they stay healthy.
Nevertheless, trees are important for fauna because they eat trees. Furthermore, fauna is destroyed because they do not have to eat for them. Besides, if we may plant trees so they catch up carbon-dioxide and people are given oxygen by trees.
On the other hand, if we do not plant trees, hence does not catch up with carbon-dioxide and peoples are sick. Furthermore, animals are destroyed as well as do not have any wood to build to the house so that we can not make a new house, because we have fewer trees.
To conclude, trees are paramount in our lives and we must be planted trees in rural areas and modern cities then they give a lot of houses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, lastly, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, well, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48444444444 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44636692079 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 312.3 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.9955353583 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.0833333333 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5833333333 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404887803781 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171850793325 0.084324248473 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.183035689176 0.0667982634062 274% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246774382456 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.184421176227 0.056905535591 324% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 78.4519038076 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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