Public celebrations (national days, festivals) are held in many countries. Some
people say that these celebrations are a waste of money and we should spend
money on more important things.
Do you agree or disagree?
National days and festivals are prominent events to celebrating the country’s traditions and culture.
Some people argued that these kinds of occasions are a waste of taxpayers’ money. I partially agree
with the given statement. This essay will discuss both views with relevant examples.
At the outset, there are a plethora of reasons why people need to celebrate their festivals, first and
foremost reason is religious festivals are connected people with their ancestors by following rituals
and devotee their god and goddess on auspicious festivals. In addition, people spent valuable time
with their family on festivals such as Diwali, Id, and Christmas. Moreover, government and
citizens will remember their freedom fighters and heroes on special days like Independence Day,
birth or death anniversary of martyr heroes, and recall their contributions for giving freedom from
others.
Furthermore, festivals would boost the nation’s economy; people spend money on gifts, clothes,
sweets, and fireworks and support the indigenous business. To add, long time festival season would
increase tourism and related jobs. For instance, in India on Diwali vacation, people travel to many
holiday destinations in India as well as abroad and foreign tourists come to India to see various
traditions and cultures.
However, the government needs control over extravagant costs on public festivals and use that
taxpayer’s money on other government sectors, such as education, electricity, road and transport,
rail, and other important sectors and develop the country from all sides.
In conclusion, it can be said that, public celebrations are play important role in an individual’s life
and people can celebrate their festivals with joy. Similarly, festivals and national days boost the
nation’s economy and tourism sector. While government should control unnecessary costs on
various celebrations and utilize that money for a good purpose.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, similarly, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.81164383562 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84848142112 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619863013699 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.0313494676 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.214285714 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78571428571 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.38176352705 479% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311371293105 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105170810145 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742074020455 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0848627252104 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785640109875 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.42 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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